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[Insanity - The first act]

cough preloader

Needs a pre-loader and sound... And maybe a little less randomness? lol, or maybe more randomness :o I like the style / look of your animation though, keep up the good work!

-3 no menu / preloader
-2 no sound
-1 A bit short + loop

JosephZayas responds:

I'm so sorry. I don't know how to add preloaders or stop the loops. I'm still new on this :D

[Mario's quest for shrooms]

FINALLY!

HIS WEAK SPOT IS HIS NOSE! I FINALLY KNOW HIS WEAK SPOT YAYAYAY!

Err... Ok seriously,

Nicely done for a first but some of the text near the beginning went really fast and some of his jumps weren't very smooth and had no laws of gravity at all, also the battle could have been longer :)

Otherwise just a few touch ups to how things line up, a bit more smoothness in the motions, and some speed adjustment and you could be making some decent sprite flashes.

In particular, I say I could have done without the coin collecting at all and I would have liked the battling longer.

Thanks for the time!

SteelDagger responds:

well i didnt get too good of a score but thx for the criticism i just hate when people criticize by going "oh this looks so stupid and unoriginal make it better"

[Viking Madness]

YEA VIKING!!!!

I would have normally givin this an 8 for its creativity and entertainment value but just because you had amon amarth you get a bonus point! :)

[Madness Consternation]

One of the best!

I liked the opening and compared to some of your others this one is a bit more creative, 10/10, keep up the good work!

[Madness Inundation]

I love this series!

I do love this series and yet I find many to be very similar. Bit more creativity and I'd giv ya a 9 or 10. Regardless, thanks, I enjoyed it.

[With My Mind's Madness]

Absolutely brilliant!

I have never played Psi-Ops but I thought this was amazing. The style definately complimented the song and setting. And awesome job syncronizing the song to it! Definately 10/10

[Random Things]

wow...

I actually quite liked it, a few things here and there like the not so good loop of the music and such but otherwise I really liked the concept, the drawing could have been slightly better but overall I liked it quite a bit.

[Very Hungry Caterpillar]

err...

I remember the story from back in they day but...

You coulda done a bit better I think... used some more frames... had a loading screen... which would also get rid of the annoying never ending loop...

I liked it but it could have been done MUCH better...

DavidBurgess responds:

Yeah, this is my first animated work of more than 20 frames. I wasn't hoping for a masterpiece. And if you look just a bit down, you can read my response as to why this lacks a loading screen.

[Zombie Blood]

Decent for your first...

It was ok for your first, I actually just started like 4 days ago with flash and my 1st one didnt make it through judgement but my 2nd one did. So congrats on making your 1st one get through judgement :)

Other than that, not bad, coulda had some more to it, or like... made the grime on the teeth not just a copy and pasted image, otherwise good job hope to see some better ones later on!

Foiz5000 responds:

you gotta start somewhere i guess, im a newb at it still