Retreated's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Insanity - The first act]

cough preloader

Needs a pre-loader and sound... And maybe a little less randomness? lol, or maybe more randomness :o I like the style / look of your animation though, keep up the good work!

-3 no menu / preloader
-2 no sound
-1 A bit short + loop

JosephZayas responds:

I'm so sorry. I don't know how to add preloaders or stop the loops. I'm still new on this :D

[Mario's quest for shrooms]

FINALLY!

HIS WEAK SPOT IS HIS NOSE! I FINALLY KNOW HIS WEAK SPOT YAYAYAY!

Err... Ok seriously,

Nicely done for a first but some of the text near the beginning went really fast and some of his jumps weren't very smooth and had no laws of gravity at all, also the battle could have been longer :)

Otherwise just a few touch ups to how things line up, a bit more smoothness in the motions, and some speed adjustment and you could be making some decent sprite flashes.

In particular, I say I could have done without the coin collecting at all and I would have liked the battling longer.

Thanks for the time!

SteelDagger responds:

well i didnt get too good of a score but thx for the criticism i just hate when people criticize by going "oh this looks so stupid and unoriginal make it better"

[Very Hungry Caterpillar]

err...

I remember the story from back in they day but...

You coulda done a bit better I think... used some more frames... had a loading screen... which would also get rid of the annoying never ending loop...

I liked it but it could have been done MUCH better...

DavidBurgess responds:

Yeah, this is my first animated work of more than 20 frames. I wasn't hoping for a masterpiece. And if you look just a bit down, you can read my response as to why this lacks a loading screen.

[Zombie Blood]

Decent for your first...

It was ok for your first, I actually just started like 4 days ago with flash and my 1st one didnt make it through judgement but my 2nd one did. So congrats on making your 1st one get through judgement :)

Other than that, not bad, coulda had some more to it, or like... made the grime on the teeth not just a copy and pasted image, otherwise good job hope to see some better ones later on!

Foiz5000 responds:

you gotta start somewhere i guess, im a newb at it still